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活动主页在
http://www.w3.org/2004/09/W3C10.html

我在这里留了贺辞，不知版主们觉得如何。
建议大家回复形式加贺，请注意措辞即可。
http://www.w3.org/2004/09/birthdaycard/

Congratulations from W3China

Happy Birthday to W3C !!

We're glad to contribute our efforts to assist people in understanding and utilizing your standards, recommendations and research.

In this commemorable day, we are grateful for all you've done. We believe your activities ARE leading the Web to its full potential.

Sincerest greetings from W3China.ORG, the W3C Standards Study Group in P. R. China.
QIN Pu qinpu@w3china.org, sent on Sun, 10 Oct 2004

另外，很高兴的是，贺辞审核过程中，已经有热心的J. Grant来访问了W3China站并且提出了一些首页上的语言问题。他表示如果需要可以为我们来做Proof Reading。邮件同时转发给Admin了。

好 W3C 中国, 好 Mr. QIN Pu,
我是 Jonathan Grant。抱歉我將必須寫這電子郵件在英語。

I noticed some minor gramatical problems in the English on the front page (http://w3china.org/) of your site:
1) "dedicated to promote the widespread deployment of W3C technologies."
This should be:
"dedicated to promoting the widespread deployment of W3C technologies."
2) "ideally suited for discussions and exchange of relevant information."
This should be:
"ideally suited for discussions and the exchange of relevant information."

(This text is also on this page: http://www.w3china.org/aboutus.htm)
I hope this helps. If you need English proof reading mabye I can help.
I also proof read for fsfeurope.org
Kind regards
JG
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